extrait 19 Inspiration p. 302-303
Excerpt 19 teacher’s version
interpretation line |
character-based: Nathan has reached full recovery from illness and has projects. theme-based around death. How to counteract death. About the importance of family links when people are alive, and important because they are the key to your outliving your physical death. No religious idea however. |
situation |
Nathan is in hospital for control. He is thinking of his neighbours and about the meaning of an empty bed. |
structure of the passage |
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characters |
mentioned: Omar Hassim Ali 1 Rodney Grant 7 |
place |
hospital |
tone |
Quite serious about death (in contrast with other excerpts. No irony, rather bitterness at first but he is able to react positively by taking action or at least by building up a project. a touch of humour in the “biography insurance” 35 ironic and serious at the same time in the conclusion of the passage: “one should never underestimate the power of books” |
death is equated with |
Oblivion. Nathan is fighting against the idea of death, of people being forgotten; (perhaps a fear that applies to himself.. but he is trying to find solutions to prevent people’s oblivion. Imagining a business based on it, which means that he feels fully alive. He even imagines how to organize this business. |
lexical field of oblivion/ uncertainty |
wondered if he had been transferred 5/ |
lexical field of death |
dead 5, force of erasure, blotting out, the realm of darkness and oblivion8, death X2 9, die 14, buried in the ground 15 (reminiscent of the Bible: return to earth what we are all condemned to), we were gone.. 16 obituaries 16 |
lexical field of life/ of the living ones |
dead people can survive in their works/ |
thought process |
pondered 9, thought 1,wondered 2, remember 2; imagining 6; hypothesis 6; idea X 4 times between lines 9 and 12. |
time elements |
uncertain future 7/ every hour for the rest of my life 12; prolepsis: his idea 10-11 little by little all traces of that life disappear. 20 six months after the subject had died 41 now/ back to life 43; once, for the rest of their lives 45; outlive them, outlive us all. 46 |
the individual in the world |
No one 13 (his argument is that it is the same for all) repeated 4 times. a sense of doom for the ordinary individuals and a feeling of injustice, that one can be forgotten so fast. Nathan is going to stop that. Six months after the subject had died 41 (the person has become a subject in the mean time... has nearly lost his identity.) |
how are people referred to |
names of his co-patients the men 8 / no one / friends and families 15; the powerful and the famous 17 opposed to the ordinary , the unsung, the workaday people. (opposition family/ other people; through social conditions; a person 20 (most lives 20) inventor, architect, most people 21; family relationships: stronger than professional success. assistant manager or factory worker opposed to father, parent, brother etc 40their loved one.43, the forgotten ones 27 |
intrusion of the world in people’s lives or deaths |
no obituaries / no monuments 21 inventions/ |
images |
haunted by some mysterious force of erasure, blotting out the men/ ushering them into a realm of darkness and oblivion .7,8/ |
clues/ reason opposition between fears and reason |
When you have no answers, you make up hypotheses. Difficulty to maintain some reason when your fears are irrational. reasonable supposition 5; I couldn’t help imagining 6; I didn’t have a single scrap of evidence 6; death real or imagined 9 there are several types of death. You are dead when you have no longer any projects. /you are more dead when people have forgotten you. |
echoes |
§ Nathan has saved Tom / has settled Harry’s case by avenging him/ has rescued Lucy then her mother. Now has found the means of preventing oblivion. § Echoes of his former work in the biography insurance 34. (once a rascal, always a rascal, it seems to be the same for the insurance business.” permanence in ever changing life. |
action |
.No action he is thinking, imagining... but thinking of action. in imagination “resurrect” 44, publish, write |
tenses |
past and past perfect : wondered if he hadn’t been transferred 4 we are in a narrative. conditional: retrospectively the future” we would all die” 15 (general truth for the future) and projects “would be commissioned” 29 present: general truths: “most lives vanish” 20 |
uncountables |
paragraph 2 mostly most opposed to a few |
the project |
Writing books about ordinary people when they die to fight oblivion. material aspects: form/ payment/ growing business, solutions to tackle the problem/ targeted public (not just the rich)/ Tries to establish a link between the dead and the living ones before traces disappear. |
“one should never underestimate the power of books” |
books: a means of overcoming solitude, illness, A means of assessing one’s position in life. Understanding where one is. a means of keeping alive for children and grandchildren or future generations. Importance of family links. |